Kidnapped; Chapter 16 Teaser

Here’s a little teaser from Kidnapped. I know it’s not much but I hope you enjoy it~ ____________________________________________________

“Hello Edward,” the pale white man with pale blonde hair said as he smirked.

Still unwilling to let go of his defensive position, Edward stood before Bella – his arm stretched to block her as one of her hands held onto his arm tightly. Unable to explain why she was so afraid at that moment made her panic even more. It was like something within her told her that the two creatures her were dangerous. It was like some naturally born instinct within her was telling her to run for her life was in danger. Edward’s outstretched arm before her wasn’t helping her situation either as she continued looking at the two beautiful creatures before her.

Even with Edward’s defensive stance, the two didn’t even flinch; they just stood there – completely still, and completely relaxed as if this was their home. They didn’t seem to pose any danger yet… Bella couldn’t shake of this uneasy feeling inside her that they were trouble.

The woman with the bright red hair moved a little and before Bella could take in another breath, the woman was standing right in front of Bella. With only Edward’s arm separating them, the woman gently tipped Bella’s chin up with her hand and took in Bella’s features as she stared at her. After what seemed like forever, the woman took in a long and deliberate deep breath and stiffened. Edward growled as the woman turned her head – never once letting go of Bella’s chin.

All this time, Bella couldn’t do anything but stood frozen, her fingers digging into Edward’s flesh that marks would have probably appeared.

“She’s human…” the woman whispered as she stared at the man with pale blond hair.

“Get your hands off her,” Edward spat out through clenched teeth. The woman still remained unmoving as she continued assessing Bella with the most intense expression. “Victoria, I swear if you don’t remove your fucking hand off her, I will rip it off…” Edward all but shouted through his still clenched teeth.

His tone, his facial expression seemed to have given the woman – whom Bella presumed to be called Victoria – the message that he wanted to convey and she quickly let go of Bella and in a flash, was next to the man’s side.

Bella was scared but stunned at the same time. Throughout her time in the Underground, she had never seen Edward look so… so… frightening. Nor did she ever hear him swear or curse in front of her. His eyes were no longer the warm green but dilated as adrenaline pumped through him as if there was impending danger.

“Now now Edward. No need to get all animalistic on us, we mean the girl no harm. Though I am awfully curious as to why she’s here…” the man spoke as he lifted his hands up to show that he meant no danger.

Edward’s defensive stance never relaxed as he spoke, “Why are you here James?”

“We just came to visit. It used to be our home too you know. Well, at least until you know what,” James spoke. However, as he spoke, his eyes weren’t on Edward, they were on Bella.

They were too far away to really read what they were thinking but from Bella’s observation, they looked curious, shocked even when they first noticed her presence.

“We come in peace Edward…” Victoria spoke in her little high pitched voice. “We mean you or Alice or your little pet no harm.”

Edward’s stance soon relaxed as he saw they assessed the situation until he knew that they really meant no harm and that this was just a little visit. However, he never really let go of Bella as his arm wrapped around her waist and pulled her close to him.

Wrapping her arms around Edward’s neck, Bella turned her head to look at the insanely gorgeous couple before her. Their names were easy enough to remember, James and Victoria and judging from the good looks and pale skin, Bella inferred that they were definitely not human and definitely not like Edward or Alice. The woman’s touch had been ice cold instead of the scalding hot from Edward’s touch. The only assessment that Bella could make was that they’re vampires.

Seeing that Edward has relaxed, James smiled at him. It wasn’t the friendliest of smiles but it did help in removing some of the tension in the room. “Perhaps a more suitable place for a little catching up?”

Edward nodded before calling out for Alice. Alice appeared within seconds and took Bella from Edward. After instructing Alice to bring Bella back to her room and get her ready for bed, Edward walked through the huge double doors towards the hallway to his room.
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Till next time.

LVG

Recommendations

Hey all, since I haven’t been updating lately, here are some of the fics I’m currently reading or hope to read soon~

Let's Get Physical by Lalina

Currently a WIP but there’s an update every Tuesdays. One of my very favourites. Trainerward is really dreamy and I love how Bella is portrayed in this story. Instead of being a slim beautiful girl, she’s an overweight lady and unable to catch anyone’s eye, well, except the eye of her personal trainer. ;)

A Rough Start by ItzMegan73

Also another WIP. I just adore the idea of a Daddyward so as expected, I can’t wait for the next update! Very well-written and I just love the interaction between Edward and Anthony and off course Bella. (:

Beyond Time by TKegl

I haven’t started on this story but from browsing through, it looks promising. And it’s finished with the exception of the epilogue! I couldn’t help but have a sneak at some of the chapters and it’s quite well written and believable too~

The Wedding Party by spanglemaker9

I previously read Faking It by the same author and it was really good. Currently putting this aside as I read TSL but I’m going back to it after I’m done!

The Sacrificial Lamb by Lalina

My current addiction and it’s complete! Mobward wanting to protect Bella and all. It’s a little less cheery as compared to some of the stories I’ve read but it’s still wonderful none the less. (:

I think that is all I’m going to write down. There’s still tons of wonderful fics out there so do recommend me some. I get tons of inspiration from reading these fics! (:

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A little note

This is a little note to all those who actually read this blog, which I don’t think is a lot or maybe even none.

Anyway, for those who read, my stories are all on halt for now. School’s like driving me crazy these days… Anyways, I’ll try to write when I can and maybe post a couple of teasers so do stay tuned!

Two Faces is on indefinite halt – well, at least until I finish Kidnapped.

I’m currently working on the next chapter of Kidnapped so maybe a teaser will be up soon? Let’s hope!

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Kidnapped ; Bella’s Dress ; The Only Exception

Royal blue sequined tulle organza
A-line mini evening cocktail prom homecoming dress

“So… what’s the theme of today’s party?”

Bella giggled a little before answering. “My perfect prom,” she said as she stood up and started to unbutton her coat to reveal what she was wearing on the inside. She was wearing a blue sleeveless dress that went above her knees and it was covered in different colored jewels. The dress was pretty tight and it hugged all the right places of her body.

“Like it?” Bella giggled as Jacob stared at her awe struck and unable to say a word. “Alice picked it out for me.”

Jacob smiled as he stood up and gave Bella a long lingering kiss. “Like it? I love it,” he murmured as he placed his lips back on her. They soon parted and Jacob pushed Bella a little backward as he looked at her again. “I’m going to have to treat that lil lady a little better now,” he teased as he wagged his eyebrows and Bella smiled.

“You bet’cha.”

Two Faces Poster

Two Faces is finally in the stage of being rewritten.

To get things started, I decided to make a poster for the story. Something simple for it but it says a lot about the story. Take a look at Bella's eye color. It represents the two identities she has in the story. I'm sure many have already read the story so I think you'll understand what it means.

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Kidnapped; Bella's Outfit; Christmas

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“Oh no no. You did a lot already Bella. I mean look at the sheer amount of cookies we made. Go back and wash up a little. You’re a mess!” Alice teased as she brushed some flour off Bella’s hair.

Bella gave Alice a small smile before walking out the kitchen door and to her room. She quickly washed her hair and for the first time – since she arrived at this place, she dug through her closet for something suitable to wear. She swore that Alice had bought like a whole boutique or something for her.

Finally, she decided to wear a white tank top and pulled on a stripped cashmere sweater along with some dark jeans. They seemed the most comfortable as compared to the dresses, skirts and leggings that she found at one of the many compartments of the closet.

Questions for Chapter 7

Here are the answers to the questions, I hope it provides a clearer picture of the world I'm creating. Any questions feel free to PM me or put it in the comments here or reviews in Kidnapped! I'll reply ASAP.

From phantomessangel
Edward’s not a human or a vampire, what is he?
Edward is neither a vampire nor a human, he is actually both. As in, Edward is like Renessmee in Breaking Dawn where he is born from a vampire and human. Initially, I had wanted to make Edward a full vampire but have very different characteristics from SM’s version. However, I was so afraid of how others would take it so I thought long and hard on how to change it and decided to make Edward a vampire hybrid. Not a lot is said of what Renesmee can or cannot do so I thought it would be a nice place to venture into.

From teenytinytwilighter
Who is the girl bella dreamed of her first day in castle?
This is a simple one. The answer is Esme.

From vampiregurl
What is that thing that attacked Bella?
The things that attacked Bella are called Shadows. They are the so called spirits of vampires who died. SM never said whether they would go to heaven or hell so I decided to take this and expand it. This story has me playing with a lot of the holes in the story so in a way, I’m changing it yet at the same time, I’m also not changing it.

From Lily CullenSalvatore
What he is exactly?
I have answered this above so do go have a look.

Why did she get such a feeling of a high when he sucked her blood?
As I mentioned, Edward is a vampire hybrid so we don’t really know if it would be the same as a normal vampire when he took blood. So, I decided to add a little spice when I decided to write this story by letting Bella and Edward experience a ‘high’ sensation when he bit her. I got this idea from Vampire Academy and it will slowly lead to the climax of the story when they sleep together. (Yes, I will have these two make love but I’m not going to say when or why it happened. You’ll just need to continue reading to find out.)

Anyway, the explanation to this would be when Edward bites her, he is releasing endorphins into her system when creates the ‘high’ sensation in her. And with the endorphins in Bella’s blood, as he takes it in, it would also go into his bloodstream (Renesmee does have blood flowing through her) hence, he also experiences the high. Now, if you remember, the hybrid Nahuel does have venom within him so this is the part that I changed from the original. Edward can control when he wants to release venom when he bites someone but he needs to be extremely careful because he can lose that control very easily. That is why he was initially so afraid to bite Bella.

Hope you enjoyed reading this segment. (:

Lil Vamp Girl

Story Banner (Kidnapped)

Here's the official poster for Kidnapped~ (:

Hope you like it!

Lil Vamp Girl

Promise had been FEATURED!

Promise has been featured in lilianyas's A Must Read List blog! :D

Thank you so much for the loving Promise and sharing it with others~

Here's the link: http://www.amustreadlist.blogspot.com/
Do go check it out! (:

Lil Vamp Girl

Spolier Alert! Spoiler Alert!

Ok, so I have been feeling a little guilty about being unable to upload anything in like soooo long. Schoolwork has been but hectic and I can barely find an hour just to sit down in front of my computer and not worry about anything and just write! But that said, I do have a little of the final chapter to Memories written so I'll give you guys a little treat. This chapter has not been named yet and there are tons of mistakes in the short sneak I'll be showing everyone.

That said, do enjoy!!!
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“Yo, earth to Jacob. You there?” Emmett almost shouted as I was again, in a daze. I’ve been daydreaming more and more these days. Guess that depression thing does that two you. But what can a guy do? He’s been rejected twice. Yeah I know Bells never meant any harm but she still chose Edward over me. No resentment towards Edward though. I’m just saying.

Alice cleared her throat. “Anyway, this here’s for you Jacob.” She handed me a pink envelop and boy did it look and feel expensive. Even the envelop was decorated with elegant patterns.
I examined it closely. Must be about something pretty special. Man, if the envelop looks so fancy, I bet the inside is even fancier. Slowly, I opened the envelope – making sure I don’t ruin the fancy paper – and pulled the invitation card inside. As I predicted, it was even fancier than the envelope that it was kept in. I flipped open the card and read the contents.

As I read through, my eyes bulged wide open and I felt my heart tear a little. Hey, I still loved her…

“Bell’s getting married?” I asked. This was truly shocking news. Bella just turned seventeen and she’s getting married? So soon? Not saying that Edward won’t be able to keep her happy for a lifetime – hell, he’d better or he’s gonna have to deal with me.

The lil pixie gave me a small smile, “Yes, they’re getting married in three months.”
“B-but why? Why so soon? I mean, can’t they like… y’know… wait?” my eyes bulged and I was getting really agitated. “Don’t tell me!” I stood up from my seat, “He knocked her up! He freaking knocked her up didn’t he?!” I bellowed and for a second, the whole cafeteria turned to stare at me. I quickly sat down and shook my head. They all soon diverted back to what they were doing before I shouted.

“No… no! Edward would never do that…I’m insulted that you think of my brother that way,” Alice chided.

“Then what? Please explain this sudden urge to get married? I mean, they’re only teenagers for crying out loud! They haven’t even graduated from High School and they’re already planning a lifelong commitment?!”

“Yo, Jake. Chill…” Emmett put his hand on my shoulder. I shrugged his shoulder away. How can I calm down? When Bella is getting married at what… seventeen?!

I suddenly felt a soothing effect in my body and I calmed down immediately. That’s just plain freaky. One minute my blood was boiling and the next, I felt calm as the ocean.
Looking that I wasn’t shivering anymore, Alice took in a deep breath. “Okay, have you calmed down enough for me to explain?”

I nodded fearing that if I opened my mouth, I would just snap and yell again. Didn’t want to make a scene in this god damned place…

“Carlisle got an extremely good job placement in New York and the whole family’s moving there hence, Edward and Bella will be separated. And the only solution that we can think of for them to not be separated was that they get married. Edward already popped the question and Bella agreed Jacob. She wasn’t forced to or anything. She truly wants to spend her whole life with him.”

“But Bells has only known him for what? Less than a year? How can she be so sure he’s the one she wants?” I questioned.

I thought it would leave them dumb founded – that they would not be able to answer – but Rosalie answered for everyone. “Trust me Jacob. Bella and Edward have known each other practically her entire life. He’s the only one she wants to be with.”

I didn’t know what else to say. After Bella rejected me, I had always hoped that she would change her mind and that she would come to love me again and that she would leave Edward. And when that time comes, I would be waiting for her. I was always selfishly hoping for this but it looked like it was all futile. I had wasted my chance with her but after what Rose said, it looks like I never ever got a chance at truly earning Bella’s affections. She always looked like she was waiting for something. Like when I first met her…
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Hope you guys liked it! And thank you for visiting this blog~ Till next time!

Lil Vamp Girl

Bella's Journal (Kidnapped Chapter 5, Escape)

This here is Bella's journal that Edward gives to her in Chapter 5 of Kidnapped. Do note that this journal would be playing a small but important role in the story as I will be using this journal to give you Bella's point on view on stuff.

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Story Banner (Promise)

This here is the Banner from Promise. I did not do the Bella and Edward picture but when I saw it, I felt like it represented the chapter Piano very well. And I just loved that chapter so much. Edward confessed his love for her in that chapter!! *SQUEAL*

Hope you like it~

Lil Vamp Girl

Photos for Promise

Okay, I know I previously posted photos from Promise on my other blog but I've decided to post this for those who just started reading~ (:

Lil Momo

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Bella's Wedding Dress

Bella's Ring


Dress Bella wore on her 1st Date with Edward


Bella's Gift from Rose and Alice on her birthday

Birthday Party Poster

Invitation Card (Back)

Invitation Card (Front)

Thanks for reading Promise!

Lil Vamp Girl

Author's Note

Hello and welcome to my blog page for my writing persona as Lil Vamp Girl~ (:

So here's a little note to all those who bother to come visit this blog. It means a lot that you are visiting~ Okay, so this blog will be for me to use to post up photos, spoilers and maybe recommendations for fanfiction. I have been thinking for a little while and I decided to do this as previously, I used my previous blog but that was my personal blog which I used a long time ago.

It was a little odd to post stuff on there as not only will my readers read it but my friends too. Trust me, lots of my friends don't even know I write fanfiction. I don't really have one that is a crazy Twihard like me but I love them all the same.

Okay, so I hope that this will be another platform for me to be able to communicate with my readers.

Thank you~

Lil Vamp Girl